Nate #34

‘‘They came by water’’

Representational

The participants of this image are white rabbits, to the indigenous people known as the white man who invaded their land. The representation of the rabbits is showed as rabbits with wealthy clothing with a straight posture to symbolise power and strength. Their relationship with one another seems to be very strong for they all follow each other in a group standing strong and very aware. In this image there is a huge attraction and that is the boat, it gazes our eyes to the boat because of it enormous size. The vector suggests a relationship with the rabbits for that the rabbits show complete ownership over the boats showing a relationship of ones property. The significance of the reading path shows that the rabbits have came off their boats and rose to new land prepared to conquer. The red flag one rabbit carries is a motif that is present in this image, it is a symbol of power and determination to find new land and to conquer a new beginning.
Interactive
The image offers us to gaze at the boat and for us to see them get of and enter into new land. It also offers us to watch the rabbits conquer new land from a close distance. We are over ruled through this image, to be informing them to stop this action of taking away the land they want to have. The image of the boat is angled in a low position and from a far; this action was taken to show the viewer that the rabbits came from far away to find and conquer new land. The image of the rabbits is taken very close and from a frontal angle, this was implied to show that with the straight posture of each rabbit it was seen as they had strong men and were demanding and focused to do rite. The modality of the rabbits is high, the colours are bright and strong this is done to make objects or characters in the picture more attractive to show people the importance of the picture. Illumination is contained in this image, the background of this image show that it is a gloomy day for others but it also shows that it is a glorious day for others. This is shown as the gloomy dark sky for the owners of the land for it will be taken away by the right rabbits making a mixture of a bright blue background for those who have found new land.

Black Land White Mans Land

We gave you everything?

Alcohol
Disease
Racial abuse
Half casts
Homelessness
Sadness
Stolen children
Broken families
Poverty

You gave us all we could take

Land

Are you not our wealth givers?
Everywhere a black footprint
Everywhere a block in Toorak
Everywhere a white millionaire
On black land

http://paolospoems.com/poem-338/black-land-whitemans-land/

Which part of the exposition are you responsible for?

The introduction and conclusion is what Justin Ishac and myself Nathanael Balido Are responsible for in this project

What supplementary material are you using to back up your thesis points (your argument) ?

we are using recent events like Kevin Rudds apology to help us out with the thesis point. We can also use different types of medias like the internet magazines and surveys to help us get Aboriginals into the constitution.

What is an exposition?

Exposition is a type of oral or written discourse that is used to explain, describe, give information or inform.

What is a thesis point?

A thesis point focuses on the centralized arguement of the proposition.

How is an exposition text type structured?

An exposition starts off with an introduction which introduces the case and then comes the body which contains an argument with supplementary material and to finish off is the conclusion that wraps up all your work.

Are you staisfied with the groups progress so far?

Yes, i am definitely satisfied with the group i have been put into because we have all started to be great friends creating an awesome team which is well managed and well organized with their work. We have spread out all the tasks equally and fairly.And our team has been doing great.

Who is not pulling their weight?

Well i haven’t had the encounter with that problem so far because i believe that we have all adapted to the task and has started progressing on the given project by researching and starting on the project.

What are your frustrations?

My Frustrations in the group have rarely been a incident but when it comes they mostly assume to be that work is not being done, communicating with one another becomes a problem and also un-organization such as required equipment is not being brought in.

How will you deal with these?

Well the way i deal with it is buy making sure that everything is running well making daily checks on each group member and also making sure all necessary equiptmant needed for school is in my bag before leaving home.

What do you need to achieve this lesson?

Well this lesson i will achieve researching all necessary information needed to create the start of the preamble task and to make sure my team is working smoothly and progressively.

What significant moment in Indigenous History occurs this week?

The significant moment in indigenous history that had occurred today was an public apology given to the stolen generation which was presented at the Parliament house in Canberra given by Prime minister Kevin Rudd.

How may you use this as supplementary material?

We can use this information by looking on how the indigenous people had lived a cruel and harsh life in the past and we can use it in our project to use it as our guide in our study topic.

What is your aim for this lesson?My aim for this lesson is to be catching up on all the work i have miss out on and to start a draft evaluation of the indigenous people of Australia from the dream time to the present.